[ricknasty]

HERE IS MY NEW WEBSITE , ITS JUST FOR ORAL SEX JAWJACKERS.NET Amateur street hoes who drain balls give me your feed back

[gonzogone]

Hey Rick - when you want feedback on a site, please post to Sounding Board

[Tigger]

I've seen this site before ?

[Tigger]

thought so http://www.adultforums247.com/forums...r-website.html

I have to say truly amazed no lessons have been learnt

[gonzogone]

me thinks so... but this time it fits on the screen without a horizontal scroll... so that's a plus

[ricknasty]

Tiger, what did i do wrong this time?

[Tigger]

best thing you could do is read the other thread as this site is a mirror design, your efforts really are going to waste without learning the basics

[ricknasty]

well, i thought my biggest problem before was the design, so what is my problem now? just give me a starting point

[Tigger]

again frank views here !

to be honest it still is the design but thats a personal choice and if you like the design and think it can convert fine - I don't

you were given a lot of information before - such as no text, no seo, no previews, so very little to make any sales combine that with multi coloured text, text thats difficult to read, all capitols used in sentences, few pages the site doesn't have much going for it.

Your were given some very good advice in the last thread and if you want to make a go within this industry I suggest you start learning the trade rather than using a site builder that will do nothing for your chances of success

[ricknasty]

Ok Tiger, here is what i have to say, you said i dont have previews, previews of what? i have previews, i show clips of the videos i post. There isnt many pages because i just started the site about 2 weeks ago, and i thought that the colors would make the page more attractive, more interesting you know. And you or no one ever explained to me, how i make the site more search engine friendly seo correct? So how do i do that, and what is wrong with the design? i dont come up here to joke around, i ask because iam trying to get better, and i honestly thought that people value content more than the design!

[Tigger]

the idea behind previews is not only to offer possible members free images but get additional keyword terms onto the site ( research doorways) but as you have no text on the you need to further research this, which was also pointed out to you in the other thread

come up here to joke around, i ask because iam trying to get better

and we are happy to help you, but advice was given to you that you ignored and then went ahead and built another site, so from our / my viewpoint you are not listening to any advice being given to you

[gonzogone]

the only thing I see that has changed is the width issues, otherwise it's really a copy of the other site. Honestly, I didn't notice that it was a new site.

You need to get a handle on SEO before you go any further. As Tiggs pointed out, keywords, doorway pages and text needs to be your starting point. Don't do anything else until you've got some handle on those concepts. You can go here and read some of their keyword tutorials to get you started - WordTracker

[VoyGeorge]

I'll add that your warning page is a complete waste. While I am actually for warning pages in many situations, you must remember the index.html page is the one the SE's put considerable weight into.

There is absolutely NO reason why your warning page can't have relevent keywords explaining what's in the site. If Google were to index this as your main page all they'd be able to get from the site is that you have to be 18+ to enter.

For an idea of what the SEs see about your site go here:

whois.sc

click on Site Profile, then look at the bottom where it says "Search Engine Preview." I think you'll agree this isn't going to get you into the SEs, and that's where your best traffic will come from.

You are certainly able to also have a PG-rated "sexy" pic or two to tease your audience.

You're using RTA labels, a 2257 statement, and so on, so I can see you're serious about following a good example. Technically your site functions, but as Tiggs and S4E says, graphics-only pages are an absolute waste. To an SE they do not exist. You are throwing out good time and money by - quite literally - designing your site in a way that is unfriendly to SEs.

So here's my suggestion: Stay away from site builders and "pro" Web sites as examples of how to design. Find a good amateur site that is fairly well received. You can start by using a SE to find the top 10 sites for the search terms you want to target, and then study how they got to that ranking.

(Sometimes the reason may not be clear, and it can sometimes be the age of the site, the depth of pages of the site, the number of independent links to it, and so on, but many sites in the top-10 are also keyword-rich and good starters for learning from.)

[ricknasty]

ok, i went to that page, and its very confusing to me, please tell me what is it that iam missing? more words on the page, ? if you explain it to me real simple, then i will understand what you mean. thank you

[gonzogone]

which page did you go to? There were a couple that were pointed out for information on your site and then information on keywords and a start on SEO