[saint160]

Real Sweethearts

Check it out and let me know what you think, thanks!

[Gaystoryman]

First glance, way too many categories. Bit confusing which you might want to think about having a few categories, then have sub categories, hiding the heirachy on your front page of the blog.

my 2 cents

[Tigger]

I don't have a problem with the cats or layout looks OK to me, but their again I'm just starting to develop a similar size blog right now so have that idea in my mind

The things that does jump out is your lack of any SEO so for starters install the Platinum SEO plug in then rename your structure to a more SE friendly name rather than the current default page names - Also work on your page titles & desriptions

The content within your postings is poor I looked at a couple and some had next to no text at all and its the text that will gain your rankings - you also have comments open which will lead to a mass of spam so I would close comments as the only people that will write comments are the ones saying " click this great site out"

The black label ads you are using all open in the same window so anyonew click on those will send traffic away from the site so change that to new window

But its the content and SEO plugin you need to sort otherwise it wil never get traffic

[saint160]

Thanks a lot for the feedback and I agree, I went with a ton of affiliate rss feeds initially trying to get the feel of them but did not go back and delete the ones I did not like. I killed most of it last night thanks to your gentle well meaning prodding :-) If you have time take a look at it now and see if its better. I wonder if I should drop the celebrity galleries, they are a legacy of a previous incarnation of the blog which was going to be a non nude celebrity blog focused on sci fi celebrities. It was pretty terrible from a conversion standpoint but I did not want to waste two years of url hosting so im shifting over to a teen/babes blog.

[Tigger]

TBH I can't really see a difference and you've got a lot of issues you still need to address if you want to stand a chance of getting it ranking - just look at my first posting they are laid out

the blog which was going to be a non nude celebrity blog focused on sci fi celebrities

As a scifi fan I did wonder what I was going to see when I clicked the link, but I agree with changing the direction as you would struggle to get something like that converting

[saint160]

I just received your feedback as I posted the thanks. Thank you for your time and suggestions. I will hopefully have everything in order by the end of the weekend for further review. Take Care !

[Tigger]

no worries, give a shout when you've made some changes then we can have another peep - just don't forget to get the platinum plug in sorted as that will help

[saint160]

Hey Tigger

How's it going? Hope your weekend went well.
I made some changes to the site and also installed the Platinum SEO plug in you recommended.
When you get a chance please take a glance and let me know what you think, thanks a lot!

[Tigger]

weekend was hot thanks

so, you've got the plug in installed, so why aren't you using it?

You need to work on your post titles as having the default setting is doing nothing for your SEO attemps ( CamWhoreVids: Watch Camwhore Envy Evie rub her tight moist pussy |) so open all your posting and add a custom page name

Also your post titles need a lot of work (CamWhoreVids: Watch Camwhore Envy Evie rub her tight moist pussy) would anyone search for CamWhoreVids? Envy Evie ?? I don't think so, not unless Envy Evie is a big name within the cams market. A better one would be - "Live feeds Females rubbing Wet Pussy" maybe add webcams into that

But you've also left comment tags open & the amount of text on your postings is ZERO so how do you think these are going to rank? especially as you have no page description as well

You've got a LONG way to go