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08-14-2010, 07:56 PM
 
Hi guys/gals,
I've not `launched` this properly as yet. Just got it all working first!
I've got a couple of minor things to sort, which won't affect anything majorly and will probably start tomorrow night.

Splatbukkake.com The home of the UKs most beautiful horny, creamy girls!
UK babes facial/bukakke/gangbang site

I'm in the process of building a couple of feeder tours, themed specifically on
i) UK pornstar bukkake/gangbangs
ii) teen buk/gb
iii) amateurs buk/gb

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is the affiliate program site- just splatbukkake.com content on there as yet, but more in the pipeline.

I've yet to do the flash animated header, and still needs some more content. Otherwise its in reasonable shape i think.

Anyway, please feel free to chip in any thoughts, critiques. Anything that can help, please feel free!
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I've yet to do the flash animated header
Right Up Alley, this could be interesting

Sorry, but I can't resist I'll explain after his nibs sees the request
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08-15-2010, 02:39 AM
 
Hi Rob

Welcome to the forum

OK wake up call - and a direct review, if you don't like sorry ( statement made as people do get upset when asking for reviews)

Looking at the first one - you say you have a few minor things to sort out - if your after SE traffic you have a bit more than that - Whilst the design looks ok and really no different from any other bukkake site you've got zero seo on the site and you need to address that otherwise it will never pull traffic

The index has no content (text) that mentions bukkake / cum facials and your title needs looking at "Splatbukkake.com The home of the UKs most beautiful horny, creamy girls!" no one is going to search for your URL and as I know the bukkake market as I have a few sites myself I can tell you I've never seen anyone looking for "beautiful creamy girls" - maybe "bukkake cum sluts" but beautiful!

On the index you also have no heading or description - or a link to site map

The next page is just as bad TBH - and at a guess the other pages are going to be tourpage1/2/3.php !! - this is a massive waste when pages should be names to help the marketing / seo process so called british-bukkake / free-bukkake-photos / original-uk-bukkake I'm sure you get the idea then titles, descriptions and content should support the page title - not as you've got with tourpage0.php then a title with just the url and nothing else

My advice is spend sometime doing your SEO research before you carry on as otherwise your only going to have to rebuild this later on - So design - looks fine nothing different, traffic chances not a hope and this needs addressing

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08-25-2010, 11:43 PM
 
I couldn't put into words what I thought was wrong with it so I had fun and spent about 20 minutes reworking your design keeping certain aspects the same. This is what I came up with.

 
 
 
 
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08-26-2010, 07:33 PM
 
Hey Tigger-
feel a bit embarrased but you're right on all counts. Its something I'd put off until later and then forgot about..... critical and important I know, and shouldn't have been forgotten.
You made some good points which I've tried to address and its also reminded me I need to set up my specific keyword/niche tour trails.....hrmmphh.... who's idea was it to just put 24hrs in a day eh?

Thanks for the heads up, and I consider my ass well and truly kicked. 8)
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08-26-2010, 07:35 PM
 
Hey Mayers- thanks man. Appreiate the input.
The design is a bit dated I know, and I actually shelved one I might dig out and use elsewhere, which was funky, but a bit too much like a `cool` design-led high-brow blog.
I'm doing a TV/TS site next so might use this forum as an ideas table!
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08-27-2010, 02:12 AM
 
no problems rastan - just make sure you read the link I posted on basic SEO before you start the next site as the site structure needs to allow for optimisation so its not something you can just add later on

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08-27-2010, 01:25 PM
 
thx man, will do. The article was really informative and dispelled a few myths that are now wwwaaaayyy out of date it seems, so thanks for that.
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09-01-2010, 01:55 AM
 
The quality of photos dont look too appealing to me (Enter page)...If it was mine I would put much higher quality photos on the front page.... but when you enter it, it looks good.

I would create much higher quality looking "splat" effect you have under "Join Now" ...fix the text alignment on the page also or maybe play with different style text style..I would also play with the color scheme...in the preview video you have a nice black background and it makes your site name/logo really stand out...


I really like the logo in the preview video...pretty cool.

Over all I like it...obviously needs work but I am sure your doing just that.

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Thanks BootyKrush- some good points and I'll certainly take on board the stuff you've raised. The front page need some more thought and effort put in for sure. Its somethign a few people have mentioned now! 8)
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